Using fancy words doesn’t make you a good writer.This has been quoted before but it deserves the spotlight again.
This paragraph of staggeringly incoherent, inchoate, maundering word jamble is somehow both a perfect distillation of Amber's mental maladroitness and yet also a breathtakingly beautiful utterance. Frustrated writers: imagine coming up with that paragraph for your mentally deluded fat lesbian character.
You actively exclude people who want to read it, but most people don’t understand it.
A good writer knows how to describe stuff.
Easily. Understandable. Words.
But one DOES sound like a pretentious prick, that’s for sure!