Book Idea -

[Heartmoth]

So I was watching 50 First Dates for the tenth time (Adam sandler is so good~) And I had this idea for a book...
So in the book basically, a guy wants this girl, but she doesn't want him, so he kidnaps her and then the very next day he tries to convince her that she has amnesia every day just like the movie, and at first its difficult, but eventually she decides to play along with it and then things get stockholm syndromy and they actually fall in love and she decides to declare her love and lack of amnesia to him

What u guys think?

 

[Exorbital Columnations]

I think that given your apparent level of writing skill you might want to stick to webcomics.

 

[Y2K Baby]

So I was watching 50 First Dates for the tenth time (Adam sandler is so good~) And I had this idea for a book...
So in the book basically, a guy wants this girl, but she doesn't want him, so he kidnaps her and then the very next day he tries to convince her that she has amnesia every day just like the movie, and at first its difficult, but eventually she decides to play along with it and then things get stockholm syndromy and they actually fall in love and she decides to declare her love and lack of amnesia to him

What u guys think?

I'm already writing it.

 

[Incognito Mood]

Sounds kind of interesting, but romance novels aren't really my thing. I think I'll pass on this one.

 

[Exorbital Columnations]

I'm already writing it.

This book idea but broken down into pithy one-liners?

I'm back on board.

It's actually a decent idea, a sort of darkly comedic romp, but the ending is kind of... Meh.

 

[DogEatDogFood]

As a deconstruction of shitty romantic movies could work

 

[Y2K Baby]

This book idea but broken down into pithy one-liners?

I'm back on board.

It's actually a decent idea, a sort of darkly comedic romp, but the ending is kind of... Meh.

Word choice is Angloized. Block.

 

[DogEatDogFood]

This story would work better with a tragic and downer ending. It may sound edgy, but a story with that premise can't end well. An ending that reflects that relationships are not idealistic fairytales like are shown on shitty romantic comedies could work really well

 

[Exorbital Columnations]

This story would work better with a tragic and downer ending. It may sound edgy, but a story with that premise can't end well. An ending that reflects that relationships are not idealistic fairytales like are shown on shitty romantic comedies could work really well

Agreed. I think it would work better if she strung him along and eventually turned on him or something. Or gaslighted him into trooning out.

 

[Y2K Baby]

Agreed. I think it would work better if she strung him along and eventually turned on him or something. Or gaslighted him into trooning out.

Or farted on him, haha.

 

[Exorbital Columnations]

Or farted on him, haha.

Or got him to let a dog pee in his butt?! Hi-larious!

 

[Heartmoth]

Ok so instead she uses her position to blackmail him into being her servant and he gets cucked
The only problem is that in theory he could murder her and the whole family to hide the evidence

 

[Heartmoth]

But he loves her so that won't happen

 

[Exorbital Columnations]

No man, it's either dick girl transformation arc or a dog pees in his butt.

 

[OB 946]

So I was watching 50 First Dates for the tenth time (Adam sandler is so good~) And I had this idea for a book...
So in the book basically, a guy wants this girl, but she doesn't want him, so he kidnaps her and then the very next day he tries to convince her that she has amnesia every day just like the movie, and at first its difficult, but eventually she decides to play along with it and then things get stockholm syndromy and they actually fall in love and she decides to declare her love and lack of amnesia to him

What u guys think?

Not enough rape. 2/10

 

[Dolphin Lundgren]

I'm going to write the book first so you can't do it.
Edit: I'll write it before you too, @Y2KKK Baby. Then I'll sue you.

 

[Exorbital Columnations]

I'm going to write the book first so you can't do it.
Edit: I'll write it before you too, @Y2KKK Baby. Then I'll sue you.

For what? His collection of fetish gear and some pocket lint?

Be nice to the baby, man. He's troubled.

 

[Dolphin Lundgren]

For what? His collection of fetish gear and some pocket lint?

Be nice to the baby, man. He's troubled.

Don't you ruin my brilliant get rich quick scheme.

 

[Sexy Senior Citizen]

I'd suggest you read the play Gas Light to help you play up the psychological aspect (yes, the pun was intentional.)

 

[Marco Fucko]

That sounds like a horror story. Also should this just be a general book idea thread so it doesn't end on page 1?