Sonichu CWCollateral -

Manajerkop

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Thank you very much! I'm aiming to resume writing in late November, when I go on winter break.

Out of curiosity, how did you find CWCollateral, and what specifically do you like about it? Any comments or criticisms?
 

random_pickle

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Manajerkop said:
Thank you very much! I'm aiming to resume writing in late November, when I go on winter break.

Out of curiosity, how did you find CWCollateral, and what specifically do you like about it? Any comments or criticisms?

Likes: The characterization, the explanation for some of the character's actions that occured in Chris' comic, the demonization of the chu spawn, the creative way you killed said chus, and the writing makes me want to keep reading more and more, I'm not sure why that is.

Dislikes: I can't think of any right now.
 

CWCissey

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Manajerkop said:
Thank you very much! I'm aiming to resume writing in late November, when I go on winter break.

Out of curiosity, how did you find CWCollateral, and what specifically do you like about it? Any comments or criticisms?

I was introduced to CWCollateral on another thread here talking about various fanfics, I had expressed my liking of AVSA (another story I can't wait to see an update of!) and a couple of others suggested it.

As I said, I loved the characterisation, the general plot and the references. I also love how despicable you made the chus, and also the old ultra-violence because I'm a sick puppy. :P

I will admit that I felt the parts in the jungle dragged a little for me, but other than that, I've enjoyed your work a lot! Keep up the good work!
 

snowkitten91

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Manajerkop said:
Thank you very much! I'm aiming to resume writing in late November, when I go on winter break.

Out of curiosity, how did you find CWCollateral, and what specifically do you like about it? Any comments or criticisms?

That's awesome! I'll wait patiently for it. :biggrin:

I love the way you portray the many horrors of a city run by the Great Director and all the chus as an extention of his incredible selfishness and narcissism. It makes their ultimate fates so much more satisfying.

I also like very much your interpretation of the Sonichu canon characters and all of the original characters (the Honey Badgers :heart-full: ).

All in all, your work is just amazing. Keep it up!

(P.S. I know that it goes without saying, but Operation Hedgeclipper was glorious.)
 

Pine Tar

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What can I say? It's the best Sonichu fanwork that's still ongoing. And I don't say that because I've written a spinoff for it, I say that because I mean it.
 

CWCissey

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Pine Tar said:
What can I say? It's the best Sonichu fanwork that's still ongoing. And I don't say that because I've written a spinoff for it, I say that because I mean it.

Indeed, Hell I'd go far enough to say it's the best thing on DeviantART at this time, or even the best fanfic at the mo!

Hell if it weren't for Johnny Public needing an extensive background to fully enjoy it I'd say 'PUBLISH DAT SHIT!'
 

Manajerkop

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CWCissey said:
Indeed, Hell I'd go far enough to say it's the best thing on DeviantART at this time, or even the best fanfic at the mo!

Hell if it weren't for Johnny Public needing an extensive background to fully enjoy it I'd say 'PUBLISH DAT SHIT!'

Someday, once I advance a bit further in my experience as an author, I'd actually like to write and publish a book about Chris and his life. Definitely can't say the same for CWCollateral, though. I'd be facing lawsuits from Nintendo, Sega, and every other company behind the things Chris has ripped off.

I wouldn't exactly go around calling CWCollateral the best thing on DeviantART, but it definitely led to some of the best moments to ever happen to me on DeviantART (despite the massive loads of drama that somehow managed to seep into a community of Sonichu fanfiction writers, of all things).
 

Torchwood

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This story is glorious. I have been reading all day. Absolutely love the world-building. I would cheerfully kick a thousand autistics to see cwcollateral as a comic.
 

Manajerkop

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Torchwood said:
This story is glorious. I have been reading all day. Absolutely love the world-building. I would cheerfully kick a thousand autistics to see cwcollateral as a comic.

You and me both, Torchwood. I'd be more than happy to help out any fanartists who wanted to attempt that. There's one comic set in the CWCollateral universe called "Welcome to CWCville", and while it's definitely entertaining and features a heavy dose of SUZI's hyperactive awesomeness, I'd still like to see an actual adaptation. Then again, that comic would probably end up taking a good 3 or 4 years to make.

There's actually been a good dose of CWCollateral fanart since I started writing it. Check my Favorites page on DA if you're interested.
 

Pikimon

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Holy shit, this is some amazing literature my old Chris fanfic on the original forums is fucking shit compared to the masterpiece that is this story.

You my friend have a gift for storytelling.
 

Manajerkop

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Pikimon said:
Holy shit, this is some amazing literature my old Chris fanfic on the original forums is fucking shit compared to the masterpiece that is this story.

You my friend have a gift for storytelling.

Thank you very much! Out of curiosity, what was this old fic of yours about, and may I read it?
 

Torchwood

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If I may be indulged......
I just caught up. Hedge clipper was amazing. I know you said late November, but ....
I WANT EVERYTHING About cwcollateral
ON THE INTERNET!!

I'll send in editors! I'll send in fan artists! I'll send in EVERYTHING IN MY POWER!

So, yeah. Get everything on the InternetNowNOWNOWNOWNOW NOWWWWWW!



Peace to the trolls, curse everyone else.
 

Pine Tar

Disrespecting skeletons
True & Honest Fan
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Torchwood said:
If I may be indulged......
I just caught up. Hedge clipper was amazing. I know you said late November, but ....
I WANT EVERYTHING About cwcollateral
ON THE INTERNET!!

I'll send in editors! I'll send in fan artists! I'll send in EVERYTHING IN MY POWER!

So, yeah. Get everything on the InternetNowNOWNOWNOWNOW NOWWWWWW!



Peace to the trolls, curse everyone else.

Do fan writers count?
 

Pikimon

Exceptionally Overachieving Mexican
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Manajerkop said:
Pikimon said:
Holy shit, this is some amazing literature my old Chris fanfic on the original forums is fucking shit compared to the masterpiece that is this story.

You my friend have a gift for storytelling.

Thank you very much! Out of curiosity, what was this old fic of yours about, and may I read it?

It was called "Chris: The Madness Returns" and basically it's a story of Chris ending up in an insane asylum after the death of his mother and the fallout of October 28th. While at said Asylum he periodically falls into subconscious where Cwcville and his various creations and antagonists form his psyche. Wild represents Laziness, Bubbles becomes Vanity, Wild becomes Hatred while "trolls" like Clyde Cash, Jason Howell, and Mary LEe Walsh represent suppressed virtues that Chris could've had. All this connects to a large conspiracy within the Asylum that ends with Chris killing off the Chaotic Combo (and destroying the less savory bits of his personality in the process) and finding out a horrible truth about his family and church.

Unfortunatly it was purged from existance when the old Cwcki forums were shut down .
 

Torchwood

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Pikimon said:
It was called "Chris: The Madness Returns" and basically it's a story of Chris ending up in an insane asylum after the death of his mother and the fallout of October 28th. While at said Asylum he periodically falls into subconscious where Cwcville and his various creations and antagonists form his psyche. Wild represents Laziness, Bubbles becomes Vanity, Wild becomes Hatred while "trolls" like Clyde Cash, Jason Howell, and Mary LEe Walsh represent suppressed virtues that Chris could've had. All this connects to a large conspiracy within the Asylum that ends with Chris killing off the Chaotic Combo (and destroying the less savory bits of his personality in the process) and finding out a horrible truth about his family and church.

Unfortunatly it was purged from existance when the old Cwcki forums were shut down .


That was yours? Damn. I was loving that story, too. Really sucks to hear it's lost forever.
 

Manajerkop

Reigning Champion of the Kiwi Farms Bowling League
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Torchwood said:
If I may be indulged......
I just caught up. Hedge clipper was amazing. I know you said late November, but ....
I WANT EVERYTHING About cwcollateral
ON THE INTERNET!!

I'll send in editors! I'll send in fan artists! I'll send in EVERYTHING IN MY POWER!

So, yeah. Get everything on the InternetNowNOWNOWNOWNOW NOWWWWWW!



Peace to the trolls, curse everyone else.

I'M WORKIN' ON IT! *sigh*

All good things to those who wait, Torchwood. ;)
 

Pine Tar

Disrespecting skeletons
True & Honest Fan
kiwifarms.net
Manajerkop said:
Torchwood said:
If I may be indulged......
I just caught up. Hedge clipper was amazing. I know you said late November, but ....
I WANT EVERYTHING About cwcollateral
ON THE INTERNET!!

I'll send in editors! I'll send in fan artists! I'll send in EVERYTHING IN MY POWER!

So, yeah. Get everything on the InternetNowNOWNOWNOWNOW NOWWWWWW!



Peace to the trolls, curse everyone else.

I'M WORKIN' ON IT! *sigh*

All good things to those who wait, Torchwood. ;)

Get workin' on it! You better get it on there fast or I'll be up all night with you if I have to!
 

Pikimon

Exceptionally Overachieving Mexican
True & Honest Fan
kiwifarms.net
Torchwood said:
Pikimon said:
It was called "Chris: The Madness Returns" and basically it's a story of Chris ending up in an insane asylum after the death of his mother and the fallout of October 28th. While at said Asylum he periodically falls into subconscious where Cwcville and his various creations and antagonists form his psyche. Wild represents Laziness, Bubbles becomes Vanity, Wild becomes Hatred while "trolls" like Clyde Cash, Jason Howell, and Mary LEe Walsh represent suppressed virtues that Chris could've had. All this connects to a large conspiracy within the Asylum that ends with Chris killing off the Chaotic Combo (and destroying the less savory bits of his personality in the process) and finding out a horrible truth about his family and church.

Unfortunatly it was purged from existance when the old Cwcki forums were shut down .


That was yours? Damn. I was loving that story, too. Really sucks to hear it's lost forever.

Ive considering starting it up again, but Id prefer not to.
 

Manajerkop

Reigning Champion of the Kiwi Farms Bowling League
kiwifarms.net
All right, change of pace. We're doing a list. Everyone who wants to, name your favorite:

1. Honey Badger operative (SUZI and Sugar included)
2. Chapter of CWCollateral
3. Sonee or Rosey kill (excluding Hedgeclipper)
4. Hedgeclipper kill (Rosechu, Robbie, Cera, or Christine)
5. Chaotic Combo member you want to see die the most
6. Funniest moment
7. Chris FAIL moment
8. Quote
9. Most infuriating moment (see Sub-Episodes 2 and 3 for ideas)
10. Most HOOOOOOLY SHIT THAT WAS AWESOME moment

WARNING: THAR BE SPOILERS BELOW, MATEYS!
 

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