Dramatic Reading- "Little Cassie" -

[Someone]

It's morbid, perhaps the most morbid thing that I've ever read because a lot of the thoughts and feelings came from a dark place, but here's the thing

Enter doesn't read anything for sure

And, even though he is trying to say otherwise
It is just an angsty teenager "novel" he wrote in his free time

Oh my god. He's gonna make Let's Plays now?

He alredy did two actually
one of his excuse for a game
and other for Roller Coaster Tycoon
also, when he got too lazy to make reivews he livestreamed Pokemon Yellow

I didn't watch those videos, but if the commentary is in his "vlog" levels, then it must be really akward

 

[The Perplexing Ms. Escape]

Sounds more like a text-to-speach program reading the story than a human.

It's not?

 

[Teddy]

Enter is such a tryhard. Dramatic readings are so 2011.

His fanfic is bad anyway. I read the first chapter and was bored intensely. I know freshmen who write more compelling work than him.

 

[StateOfMind]

Enter is such a tryhard. Dramatic readings are so 2011.

His fanfic is bad anyway. I read the first chapter and was bored intensely. I know freshmen who write more compelling work than him.

7th Graders write better than this..

 

[NostalgiaJazzAdmirer]

Little Cassie is alright to me. Not amazing, not awful, either.

 

[KFC]

From what you guys have said, I can't furiously hate LC. That's because I think many people, including me, have once tried to create a mediocre novel. The problem here is that I, like most people, gave up shortly after making one or two, but MrEnter has made many of these, and hopes that it will become his profession. I really don't think it suits him, I think even GA fits him better. It's still not good, but seeing as GA has some sort of a fanbase, and Enter's writing doesn't, I'd say that to an extent.

LC still sucks anyways.

 

[Someone]

http://mrenter.tumblr.com/post/115430222679/do-you-intend-to-finish-little-cassie-if-so-will#notes
Hooray
Now there will be another recuring topic here

 

[DirkBloodStormKing]

http://mrenter.tumblr.com/post/115430222679/do-you-intend-to-finish-little-cassie-if-so-will#notes
Hooray
Now there will be another recuring topic here

Now I kind of want to make an MST /Comentary for Little Cassie.

 

[SpessCaptain]

Is it a First Person Story? Yes?

INTO THE TRASH IT GOES.
First Person Bad, Third Person Good. First Person is in my own opinion a lazy way to write.

Honestly I couldn't get past through the first few sentences "I have an average life" is the most droneful fucking thing a creative writer can write.

 

[Teddy]

First person reminds me of fanfiction made by Directioners or any other annoying fandom. Amateurish.

 

[chimpburgers]

Here's part two guys. He's posted it on a completely new YouTube channel of his called Mr. Enter Vlogs. It's still just as monotone and boring to listen to as the first one.

 

[Steamboat_Bill]

@DirkBloodStormKing: Do it! We'll all be grateful!

 

[Swiggity Swooty]

Here's part two guys. He's posted it on a completely new YouTube channel of his called Mr. Enter Vlogs. It's still just as monotone and boring to listen to as the first one.

I think what would make these audio books a bit less boring would be some music or some ambient noise.
As it stands, the these audio books sound like some kid in middle school whose teacher randomly chose to read to the class. It's really lifeless.

 

[Ferls]

This second video just emphasizes the anger more and more. Robert/Andrew should be experiencing a complex variety of emotions. He should be angry, but he should be also generally upset. He should be desperate, he should be sad, he should be defeated. Enter just sounds irritated, awkward, loud, and consistently paced.
He doesn't use his voice to add anything to the story, and he doesn't do anything to his voice. He is just reading it. I wonder how much he even went over it before recording.

It's better than the first one, but it'd be more impressive if he were able to churn out an equally bad one.

 

[Jumpin Jenkins]

TLDR: Enter can't read or voice for shit

 

[Piga Dgrifm]

TLDR: Enter can't read or voice for shit

Or write.

 

[Shokew]

Watched this, and I fucking died.

Shown this to my brother and a friend, we fucking died.

Death seems like the right reaction to have to writing this depressing-ly awful and tragic-ally stupid... I can't say I don't know why, but it becomes clearer once you see how said person responsible in IRL could act similar to such writing, due to an overall poor upbringing and failure to cope with it properly. And that's another cog in this hug, broken machine we've just barely discovered and found to be part of the problem here.

 

[Twilight Sparkle]

Enter=Rob=Andrew
self insert confirmed
also, generally when readings of creepypasta (that's the only reading I listen to because I'd rather read myself) is that you have to kinda act, enter isn't trying to act, he is just reading out loud. Thus, making it dull and lifeless

 

[Someone]

Enter=Rob=Andrew
self insert confirmed
also, generally when readings of creepypasta (that's the only reading I listen to because I'd rather read myself) is that you have to kinda act, enter isn't trying to act, he is just reading out loud. Thus, making it dull and lifeless

I haven't read LC
but I know is about a little girl
and it will be really akward when Enter read her lines without any acting

 

[NostalgiaJazzAdmirer]

To those who dislike it, which is worse to you: Reading the story itself or listening to its dramatic reading?