Dramatic Reading- "Little Cassie" -

Ferls

Not Farael
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The story is mediocre, and if read by someone who puts nuance into it then it's interesting.
The dramatic reading is just bad, and it drags the mediocre story down with it.
 
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Sanae Kochiya

afk Shrine Maiden
True & Honest Fan
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To those who dislike it, which is worse to you: Reading the story itself or listening to its dramatic reading?
Enter's story is cliche and dull and shows his inexperience with writing, but the reading is what hammers the nail in the coffin. It sucks the life out of the story, what little there was at least. Not to mention that, as I said before, it just shows how little care he put into the readings or into learning what the readings are supposed to be about.
 

Ferls

Not Farael
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Mr. Enter intends on rewriting the story anyway. He wrote it when he was younger, possibly as young as middle school aged. He should be waiting until after he's rewritten the story to do a reading of it.
 

Toy_Bon-Bon

Don't let those eyelashes fool you.
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Mr. Enter intends on rewriting the story anyway. He wrote it when he was younger, possibly as young as middle school aged. He should be waiting until after he's rewritten the story to do a reading of it.
There's nothing stopping him from doing both.
 
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