Sonichu [Fanfic] Super Sonichu -

[Betachu]

For a while, I've had this idea stuck in my head. Basically, the idea for a parody continuation of Sonichu. The plots will be written like they were thought up by Chris, but the story itself will directly parody Sonichu's lack of plot, pointless characters, horrific writing and so on. Here's some concept art I've made (though keep in mind that this would be a fanfic and not a web comic):



Thoughts and/or Suggestions?

 

[Chris-Chan Cure]

For a while, I've had this idea stuck in my head. Basically, the idea for a parody continuation of Sonichu. The plots will be written like they were thought up by Chris, but the story itself will directly parody Sonichu's lack of plot, pointless characters, horrific writing and so on.

This might actually have some potential. Excuse me though, i first thought it was another Asperchu ripoff, but writing the story in Chris's style has probably not been done before and if you can pull it off, it would makes for a worthwhile read.

However, to capture the essence of Chris's genius, you should rather make in a webcomic format. Regardless of actual drawing skills, crappy/lazy art is totally appropriate and adds to the hilarity factor. The only problem is that it takes more effort than simply writing, but you can fortunately compensate this issue by making horrendous walls of text, which would be no different than a fanfic.

 

[SpessCaptain]

Sure feels a little bit summer in here.

I suppose you could post your ideas in the Fan Fiction thread.

 

[Betachu]

This might actually have some potential. Excuse me, but i first thought it was another Asperchu ripoff, but writing the story in Chris's style has probably not been done before and if you can pull it off, it would makes for an interesting read.

However, to capture the essence of Chris's genius, you should rather make in a webcomic format. Regardless of actual drawing skills, crappy/lazy art is totally appropriate and adds to the hilarity factor. The only problem is that it takes more effort than simply writing, but you can fortunately compensate this issue by making horrendous walls of text, which would be no different than a fanfic.

I don't know. I was at first thinking about making this a comic, but I changed my mind over the fact I don't have a scanner, and drawing them digitally would be harder and probably not capture Sonichu's insanity. What do you the think the first "issue" should be about? The only plot I could come up with was Chris going after Snyder and Nagem (who are now the leaders of the PVCC alongside Slaweel) and something regarding the blue armed bandit.

 

[Betachu]

 

[Betachu]

Alright, I think I thought up some plot for the first two issues. Like the original "masterpiece" each issue will be divided into 3 c̶h̶a̶p̶t̶e̶r̶s̶ episodes.

Episode 1: Chris gets a generic "foreshadow of the entire series" dream where he fights the PVCC and Gay-Chris.
Episode 2: We get an intentionally boring tour of CWCville.
Episode 3: The "evil villains" attack

Episode 4; Our Mary-sues go after them
Episode 5: They fight the blarm bandit himself
Episode 6: Trans!Chris fights Gay-Chris

 

[Betachu]

About the "CHOATIC CORPS!!1" thing I showed off. After issue 1, CWCville is in ruins, so Chris decides to create an academy for Sonichus (none of whom are given any given explanation for existing) and whoever "wins" the school becomes a member of the "CHOATIC CORPS". Basically, a parody of how OP the city of CWCville is.

Does anyone have any ideas for it? Aside from it housing the new Chus I showed off and it barely doing anything to help the plot I have nothing else planned.

 

[High-Tech Redneck]

Introduce the Chaotic Combo by showing them slaughtering rioters who are upset over the 4-Cent Garbage incident. Have the rioters hold up signs with BILLY MAYS face on them.

The Blue-Armed Bandit could be introduced as a CWCville defector who stopped helping the Sonichus after Chris started executing people. Sonic then joined up with the remnants of the Miscreants, now headed by an older, hardened version of Bryan Bash.

 

[Betachu]

Introduce the Chaotic Combo by showing them slaughtering rioters who are upset over the 4-Cent Garbage incident. Have the rioters hold up signs with BILLY MAYS face on them.

The Blue-Armed Bandit could be introduced as a CWCville defector who stopped helping the Sonichus after Chris started executing people. Sonic then joined up with the remnants of the Miscreants, now headed by an older, hardened version of Bryan Bash.

I like the combo idea, but I already thought up a plan for the Blarm bandit. I don't want to completely spoil it though. Trust me, it'll probably get a few laughs and will foreshadow the end of the series.

 

[High-Tech Redneck]

I like the combo idea, but I already thought up a plan for the Blarm bandit. I don't want to completely spoil it though. Trust me, it'll probably get a few laughs and will foreshadow the end of the series.

Can't wait to hear it.

 

[Betachu]

So wait, anyone have any ideas for even stupider Chus?

 

[High-Tech Redneck]

Have you thought about including other Lolcows? like, since Chris doesn't like people with Asperger's, you could have him fight John Enter. With his last dying breaths, Enter could tell Chris that he had become what he hates most, leading Chris to wonder if what Enter said was really true.

 

[QE 757]

Please make Sonichu characters based on lolcows. Some examples :

Len Shaner Sonichu
A-L0g Sonichu
Marijan Chu
MylarBalloon Chu

edit : Blockor Chu aka. BlueBear Sonichu

 

[Betachu]

Have you thought about including other Lolcows? like, since Chris doesn't like people with Asperger's, you could have him fight John Enter. With his last dying breaths, Enter could tell Chris that he had become what he hates most, leading Chris to wonder if what Enter said was really true.

...I actually like him. Thouhh I wouldn't mind including him, I just don't see Chris fighting him. He'd probably just be one of the random-acssess cameos in something like a YouTube episode.

 

[High-Tech Redneck]

...I actually like him. Thouhh I wouldn't mind including him, I just don't see Chris fighting him. He'd probably just be one of the random-acssess cameos in something like a YouTube episode.

I used to like him, but then he blocked me because I offered him constructive criticism.

 

[Betachu]

 

[Betachu]

Test Draft

Episode 1: CWComeback



Welcome to CWCville, a vibrant wasteland led by a frustrated male... Christian Weston Chandler. For over 17 years, he and his army of mutant rats have been terrorizing the world, attacking deans, internet users and security guards everywhere. As of late however, Chris has entered a strange state of depression...

--CWCville Shopping Center--

Christian was packing his bags, preparing to leave the internet forever. With him were some important possessions like his Megatron gun, Light Knife, Medallion, ect. but he was also bringing some "questionable" things like Cly(de)'s pickle gun, the corpse of a JERKOP and the ashes of the Asperpedia four.

"We'll den Sonichoo, it looks like dis is good-baye..." said Christian. In his office were his prized creations Sonichu, Rosechu, Black Sonichu/Blachu/Blake/Niggochu, Bubbles Rosechu, Magi-chan Sonichu and Bionic the porcupine. They (save Magi-chan) were all crying.

"*sniff* Why father? Why does our series need to end this way!?" said Sonichu, who had already used up at least 4,639,752 boxes of tissues.

"It'z dos DAMN DIRTAY TROLLS that's conviancing me to stay off. *sniff* I promise I'll come bak aventually..." He then hugged his "original" Electric Hedgehog Pokemon before walking closer to the portal.

"Promise us you'll still draw out our zappin' adventures and post them online?" asked Bubbles.

"Maybah, just dependz onn wen mah curses will finally strangle DOS DAMN FILITHY TROLLS- *deep breath*"

He then got a pinch closer, looked back at his creations before shedding a tear, gives one last peace sign and then does a backwards leap through the portal....







"Does anybody know what just happened!?" asked Magi-chan.
"Nope."
"Not at all."
"Does anyone know?"
"Why am I seeing nothing but giant walls of text repeating what we're saying?"
"I FEEL LIKE I JUST WANNA RAPE SOMETHING!!!"

 

[Betachu]

I just finished a new draft (this one not just an experiment) though because it's a bit long I'll just leave a link http://sta.sh/0wso7glkc3p Thoughts?

 

[Le Bateleur]

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I really like the ironic "so bad it's good" style. It reminds me of Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff.

 

[High-Tech Redneck]

I just finished a new draft (this one not just an experiment) though because it's a bit long I'll just leave a link http://sta.sh/0wso7glkc3p Thoughts?

This is the best.