I saw this in SJW art and I just had draw it mainly to figure out what is going on. The picture is like it looks fine enough when first see it but more you look it less it makes sense. From pose to shading to colors, it's kinda okeyish but also clearly wrong. I seriously can't figure out how the butt supposed to work. It's more gets uncanny more I watch it. So I did simple redraw to give her body that makes sense. I left out the scarf and text but gave her actually nice looking underwear/bikini instead. Also it's weird how much heavier my girl looks than then ordinal despite me following the body lines pretty faithfully.