Artcow Life of Bria / Sabrina Barker Fairley Symington / Stephen Symington - Creator of the longest running Halloween Special
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Could you possibly make this harder to follow, Bria?
The cops know her personally? Who is Agnes? Wtf is going on?
Wow so subtle gotta love the graffiti that says "u lost" when they were discussing missing people
I actually liked the page preceding this. It illustrated how fucked up the protagonist was and that the therapist didn’t get it. This page feels redundant - telling what’s already been shown.
Welp, by jumping on the oppression train the author actually missed out a chance to really put in how lucky they were.
If the cop had said "But you, you're special, you came back," give it a pause for a beat, then put: "Which makes me wonder... if you realize how lucky you are."
Right there. The cops get it, they acknowledge her experiences, and validate her feelings.
But nope: "Ebul yt popo invalidate troon!" instead.
Yeah, I think I mentioned this about the previous arc, since he gets mad at cops for being 'transphobes' in that one too, but like, legitimately what should they have done? Do the police have a Vaguely Racist Aztec Murder Gods Investigation Division? Do they have teleporters to Hellraiser Dimension over at the station? Same with the snipe here about, 'wish there was someone who could have done something'. The cops literally cannot do anything to help you, unless you're proposing that they go to Hogwarts on public tax dollars and learn to become ghost hunters. Why bitch at them? Where does antagonizing them on purpose get you?
Victimhood.
Of course the cop's name is Dick.
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What is that NOSE? Wtf is going on with the tranny's forehead/hair?
Bria doesn't know how bangs work.
The way it's looking in the last panel, it's straight up growing on her forehead.
Why are Bria's secondary characters better constructed and drawn than the mains? You'd think it'd be the opposite, that the Tranny-Sues would be better drawn and the cops would be the afterthought, but it's seemingly reversed.
The answer may be that the main characters are actually over-thought. Design-wise, Bria probably has too many self-imposed boxes to check off that the characters come out especially lumpy and ill-proportioned. Before she challenges herself to drawing these weird parted bangs with grown out roots (which would look stupid as fuck, even if it were drawn well), she should just design her chars to be easier to draw.
Because even on a simpler design she has trouble with consistency: the Dick the Cop has a widow's peak in panels 1 and 3 but not in 2. I know it's pointless to write like Bria would read this, but I still wonder if she doesn't have anyone to give her a critique (she probably doesn't want one even from a friend, though).
Why does Bria even bother saying that she posts new comics twice a week? There's been nothing since October 26th.
I like that Bria kind of went with a Dutch Angle there. That shows effort. Too bad the laziness of "Dick" completely engulfs it.
Just a reminder that the comic hasn't been updated since Oct 26th. If they were actually following their schedule of posting twice a week, we would have 7 more pages by now.
Victim of coof?
No, he's posting on twitter as of 7 hours ago. Just a lazy fuck.Victim of coof?
Well, we got this new comic:
I think this year's Halloween special might end up unfinished. We'll probably get a few more pages over the next three months before it just stops.
I think this year's Halloween special might end up unfinished. We'll probably get a few more pages over the next three months before it just stops.
I'm like 90% sure this is a repost.
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