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Linework by Gneech, color by Lou.
Okay, I don't dislike Gneech or his art. But this? This looks so dialed in. What's with that left (her right) eye? She has a Picasso face practically. And the perspective on the left (again, her right) arm is horrible. Are her shoulders attached to her collarbone instead of her actual shoulders? Did someone give her an epic wedgie before this pose?
And what's with that pink line in her hair? Louis, you begged for an apple pencil replacement, but you don't seem to know how to use it that well. I even had to squint to see the shading. It looks like you wiped your Burger King hands off on her thigh or something.
I'd give you some constructive advice on how to shade and color properly, but we've seen how you treat people who give you constructive criticism.

















