I'm doing an entire re-write once I vomited it out i saw it.I'm really going to need you to do more than copypaste the OP from /cow/ because it sucks. It helps to be succinct instead of writing like a 13 year old submitting their first PA request to ED. I don't understand what they do after reading the first paragraph, the joke about being related to Corey Barnhill (pedophile, liar) seems misplaced because I don't know if it is a joke and will definitely confuse people.
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