@Konstantinos: I don't think anybody's said that, but yes, if that's the furthest you'll go in complex stuff, you have to find stuff that's better and better-written.
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Clay Claymore
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As if I needed more proof that MrEnter has no idea what he is talking about. Alright, we do I start?
Awkward and in Love (as well as anything else regarding love)
I'm sorry, isn't MrEnter an asexual or aromantic or whatever-the-hell-it-is? That would mean that he's indifferent to love/sex, right? So why the hell does he think he's qualified to talk about love? I am now fully convinced that he's not asexual, but just another loveshy nerd who calls himself that because nobody wanted to touch his penis in high school.
Bullying Just Because
Of course, because every cartoon sperg has to rant about bullies in cartoons, not because they actually are cliched, but because they themselves were bullied and couldn't/didn't do anything about it so they'll take it out on cartoon bullies because they know they won't fight back.
Daddy Works Too Much
I'll take "Projecting His Personal Issues" for $200, Alex. Seriously, I wouldn't doubt that his own father had the same issue. Oh and "it's not realistic?" Gee, it's almost like entertainment is trying to take us out of reality and make us feel for a father-son moment.
Internet/Cell Phones
This I think is the dumbest from his list. So he doesn't believe that internet and cell phones should be included because it makes the cartoons too omnipotent? When has this problem ever occurred in anything? And what if the cartoon takes place in today's society? It would be kind of weird to not have cell phones or internet.
Anyway, those are my two cents. Take them for what they're worth.
A lot of the 'cliches' he complains about are just art imitating life and him projecting.
Some of the ones he puts can be very annoying if done incorrectly such as All Just a Dream, Amnesia, The Chosen One, and Explaining the Wizard. The other ones he lists are all bullshit but his reasoning is bullshit throughout the page. He is practically telling users not to use any cliches. If he actally knew what he was talking about he would have added the cliche MY VIDEO GAME CARTAGE IS HAUNTED as a cliche to not use.
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Interesting that Enter hates the All Just A Dream thing, considering this episode of GA:
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Growing-Around-Episodes-Mind-Games-506270793
He obviously did it the right way, you dummy
He wrote it in the way he told people how should use the cliche in his writing tips so he is basically saying that people shouldn't use this cliche unless they do it Enter's way.
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Dear God, imagine what he has to say about Inception.
Pure sensory overload.
JesusWithBazookaz79
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For when mr enter complains about this shit it pretty much shows off that he is a sjw as well adms 03bgood
I think he doesn't want people to use the cell phones because he overreacted to a terrible show known as Pixel Pinkie and possibly the Replacements (if he has seen it at least). Since cell phones didn't work there, he believes that they should be banned in all cartoons which is terrible logic.
Crossed The _____________
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It's disheartening to know that young aspiring writers are taking advice from this guy.
Come to think of it - didn't his OTHER favourite show, Gravity Falls, have a Love Potion-esque plot too? One where Mabel had good intentions to help Robbie with his inability to move on from Wendy and was clearly NOT an attempt to get Robbie to rape Tambry or vice versa?
I don't know - to me, it isn't that somebody uses a love potion, but rather, what their intentions are with said love potion.
Goddammit I read that line in JelloApocalypse's voice.
This. If anything, he's Andrew Dobson's literary counterpart! (minus the halfway decent skills that Dobson somewhat possessed a while ago...)
I skimmed though it and this advice actually isn't that bad or at least compared to his other bullshit. I was expecting him to bring up MLP as good slapstick and then say the character has to get hurt as little as possible.
@Laevateinn: So did one of his other most favorite shows, Hey Arnold.
The term "torture porn" is so melodramatic. Could someone post some of the dumbest comments from it?
The term "torture porn" is so melodramatic. Could someone post some of the dumbest comments from it?
Do we have a thread for his writing, actually (the non-GA stuff)? I'd love to see someone tear that apart.
Edit: I see he's been watching some old cartoons, after all. Odd, seeing as Red Hot Riding Hood's protagonist committed suicide at the end.
Edit: I see he's been watching some old cartoons, after all. Odd, seeing as Red Hot Riding Hood's protagonist committed suicide at the end.
Yes, we do.
https://kiwifarms.net/threads/john-enter-the-writer.8303/
By the by, @Headbanger General, what's this thing about watching old cartoons?
https://kiwifarms.net/threads/john-enter-the-writer.8303/
By the by, @Headbanger General, what's this thing about watching old cartoons?
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http://www.deviantart.com/art/Growing-Around-Episodes-Picture-Day-513309014
I don't know how much this episode's been discussed, but it's a complete torture porn by Enter's standards, even with the shoehorned-in "heartwarming" ending. It's basically the kids tormenting the adults, especially Linda, the entire episode.
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