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The Dude

My dad says that's for pussies.
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I'm actually shocked at how almost every single one of his creatures is sexual in nature. I poked around on the wikia and there's a female demon that literally absorbs creatures through her vagina. I was so triggered.

The dude's a deviant.
I'm not surprised. He's a spoiled, sheltered autist who grew up in a period of time where every perverse genre of pornography is just a Google search away.
 

Alan Pardew

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I'm actually shocked at how almost every single one of his creatures is sexual in nature. I poked around on the wikia and there's a female demon that literally absorbs creatures through her vagina. I was so triggered.

The dude's a deviant.
http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Amelchya


* They go around attempting to seduce males, as an orgasm caused by one of them causes the victim to melt into slime containing their life energy, which is then absorbed by the Amelchya, imprisoning the victim's soul within her being as a spiritual sex slave.
 

wheat pasta

You're not real! Fuck you!
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Despite the obvious fucked-upness of his, um.. creatures.. I think his style, like his use of color and stuff, is pretty distinct and he ought to develop that. But I mean whatever, I'm probably a troll and blah blah blah illegal.
 

Null

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Despite the obvious fucked-upness of his, um.. creatures.. I think his style, like his use of color and stuff, is pretty distinct and he ought to develop that. But I mean whatever, I'm probably a troll and blah blah blah illegal.
He could definitely make very intricate high-resolution portraits of these space creatures but he doesn't want to develop artistic talent and feels comfortable in Crayola magic marker land.
 
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http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Amelchya


* They go around attempting to seduce males, as an orgasm caused by one of them causes the victim to melt into slime containing their life energy, which is then absorbed by the Amelchya, imprisoning the victim's soul within her being as a spiritual sex slave.
"* However Amelchya are so ugly the attempts are certain to fail, making these demon's absolutely useless."

Come on who could be seduced by that scribbled monstrosity? Except for Gaben who probably faps furiously to the idea when mommy tucks him in at night.
 

WWWWolf

Has a camera, will kick butt
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I have no idea what this is, as I am currently unable to find a matching part in any existing terrestrial being.
Penis. It's probably a penis. A weird-looking penis, or some body part that evolved from a penis, or a body part that has yet to evolve into a penis.

Come on, YOU KNOW HOW THIS GOES.
 

Enig

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WHY DOES EVERYTHING HE DRAW LEAN TO THE SIDE
I've pegged this down as two possible options:
  • He never, never moves his arm or hand completely while drawing, keeping a turreted position. This leads to the artwork having the distinct leaning to the right, along with a slight curving.
  • He has problems with jitteriness, meaning that his hands and arms vibrate rapidly in a small degree of motion so that he can't hold his arms in place long enough to keep lines straight.
 

Marionette

IT'S ME
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I'm jumping on the drawing bandwagon. Working on Mortred right now: http://navaverse.wikia.com/wiki/Mortred

I liked how his design was actually different from the mass amount of blocky, plastic, childrens' robot toys. I'm trying to move away from the obvious sperm ghost design and embracing the "sloth earthworm" aspect. It's just those damn crab claws. In order to work them into the design properly I have to give him carapace like armor and in turn isn't giving me much to show as a "sloth" demon.

I can't believe I'm taking the scribbles of an autistic, 19 year old with an ego through proper levels of professional character design.
 

Marionette

IT'S ME
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Ok this one I remained as truthful to the original as I could. I present Di'Higm



So I actually really dig this character after the fact. Apparently these are the greater beings of Envy and specialize in spell casting. I couldn't unsee the fish face and after reading they disguise themselves as "wish granters" I decided on a naga enchantress. I took out the dumb looking "fans" and added a flowing dress. Honestly, its not too bad of a character afterwards.

Edit: I'm sorry for the bad quality. All these are taken from my phone, my scanner is busted.
 
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Judge Willow Giovanna

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Ok this one I remained as truthful to the original as I could. I present Di'Higm



So I actually really dig this character after the fact. Apparently these are the greater beings of Envy and specialize in spell casting. I couldn't unsee the fish face and after reading they disguise themselves as "wish granters" I decided on a naga enchantress. I took out the dumb looking "fans" and added a flowing dress. Honestly, its not too bad of a character afterwards.

Edit: I'm sorry for the bad quality. All these are taken from my phone, my scanner is busted.

I love your shit man. It's pretty based. Thing is though its so different that it isn't really Molaay's creature anymore. Not to your discredit, but I mean like how you say "its not too bad of character afterwards" I think it speaks to more of your own talent than any grain of quality hiding within Moleman's art. Any quality in your reinterpretation is more your doing than anything of Gay Pens. Give yourself more credit!
 

Night Terror

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Honestly, some of his monsters are relatively interesting, and drawing in an abstract, psychedelic way can work. His monsters could've been a cross between Yume Nikki and the sort of things you see in the Star Wars extended universe.
But he can't draw in a style, he just vomits up coloured ink and calls it a monster. And his monsters are based on something generic, without having anything to do with, or only a tenuous link to, what they're based on (the seven deadly sins) with the grotesque exception of Lust. Basing things off something like the seven deadly sins isn't a bad thing if done properly. He didn't do it properly.
 

Judge Willow Giovanna

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Honestly, some of his monsters are relatively interesting, and drawing in an abstract, psychedelic way can work. His monsters could've been a cross between Yume Nikki and the sort of things you see in the Star Wars extended universe.
But he can't draw in a style, he just vomits up coloured ink and calls it a monster. And his monsters are based on something generic, without having anything to do with, or only a tenuous link to, what they're based on (the seven deadly sins) with the grotesque exception of Lust. Basing things off something like the seven deadly sins isn't a bad thing if done properly. He didn't do it properly.
Exactly. All of these concepts are okay in themselves and can be pulled off effectively. Trouble is Gay Pen doesn't understand what makes them effective. He didn't create these ideas, merely tried to use them and failed at horribly. Any of these ideas can be pulled off in the right hands. I guess what I'm saying is, the concepts themselves aren't unique to Gaben and thus can be used well in anyone's hands other than Gaben's
 

Null

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They could be done very well in a Lovecraftian sense. Unspeakable horrors aren't exactly a new idea. The problem is that Gabe doesn't really start there. I think I've identified the true and honest method of the Gabe Navarro autistic artistic engine of creation.

Step 1: Draw random shapes. True inspiration is hard to come by, so let God take the wheel and draw whatever the fuck you want.
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Step 2: Add random lines. These lines will shape the final look of the demon and give them their unique flavor.
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Step 3: Fill in your creation with a myriad of colors. I've opted to use a gray-scale for my background because my demon is going to be really dark and spooky.
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Step 4: Add greater detail, like facial features. These will really define the uniqueness of your demon.
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Step 5: Really bring it home with lots of random lines and colors. Don't go for any specific scheme and basically use every marker/crayon at your disposal. Demons from Nava-Verse aren't fashion conscious.
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Step 6: Add some sort of mangled looking sexual organ to it. Sex is really taboo to Gabe because he has the mentality of a 12 year old where no touch is ever a good touch, unless it's on small children he feels are his emotional peers. Remember: everything sexual is inherently evil, so slap that shit into everything you do.
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Step 7: Now, after having done everything, add a backstory.

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DOOMBEAK THE KO'AGGORIAN
MONSTROSITY

Doombeak is the patriarch demon of Nava-Verse for Wrath and he will often say incredibly cruel things about other people's artworks, before gouging out their very soul with his powerful beak. In the gaping wound left by his maw, he will then use his gigantic purple dick and balls to brutally rape what remains of his victim.​
 
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