But I thought Sally was NOT an asshole?
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Are you expecting consistency from a "show" that doesn't even have a finished series bible?
Teddy
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Probably the latter. I'm pretty sure that he didn't experience the usual things kids do during childhood.
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DrChristianTroy
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There's always room for more Snoop Dogg in your life.
Back on topic god damn is this a mess. I had never read his writing but god damn is it bad. "I’m not a young man. I’m a boy! A pre-pubescent male child! " Not just children who talks like this period? And homeboy wants this to get made into an honest to god TV show??? Kid's in for a rude awakening.
I'm pretty excited for Enter's inevitable meltdown when he gets rejected.
Principal looks at the disrespectful child in a way vaguely construed as threatening?
Knock him the fuck out with a briefcase.
Knock him the fuck out with a briefcase.
It's a good thing they left that world before they could be charged with battery, felony evasion, and vandalism.
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So his show doesn't have "Unfortunate implications" because it was not his intention?
But that would be hypocrisy considering what Enter says about other shows
and as we all know, Enter is not a hypocrite
NostalgiaJazzAdmirer
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I thought it was alright, some of the dialogue just seemed unnatural to me though.
DrChristianTroy
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So what are you standards for writing? Like if you could pick a show with amazing writing what would it be?
NostalgiaJazzAdmirer
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Animaniacs for me.
DrChristianTroy
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So you expect Animaniacs for a show to be good. Fair enough. Not what I would go with but for a kiddie show that's totally . Now how badly would you say this misses the mark from Animaniacs?
@DrChristianTroy: If you asked me, it misses the mark badly. Where Animaniacs at its best was a witty, clever show - though Pinky and the Brain and Freakazoid! are really kinda better - this isn't. This just ain't.
NostalgiaJazzAdmirer
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This is the clear loser, but then again nothing can compare to Animaniacs. Pinky and the Brain and Freakazoid are great too, but I like Animaniacs better.
What Enter thinks people talk like. And to be fair, it also plagues his reviews.
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Guest
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I've had bouts of tonsillitis that were more entertaining than that episode.
NostalgiaJazzAdmirer
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Back on-topic, two people disagreed with me, maybe I'll like it more upon a reread.
Simplicity111
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Um, we were disagreeing on the "alright" part. We thought it was bad.
@NostalgiaJazzAdmirer ...Nah, it was shit, m8... IT WAS SHIT.
I can't think of any cartoon that hasn't done this plot this awful as this - and this kind of plot sucks, as it is, on most cartoons that do it, no matter how good they might be, otherwise.
I can't think of any cartoon that hasn't done this plot this awful as this - and this kind of plot sucks, as it is, on most cartoons that do it, no matter how good they might be, otherwise.
Not just cartoons, there's movies and live action TV shows that are otherwise good, or half decent, that delved into this plot (that Thor movie from 2011 being the best recent example). It just works better when the characters are familiar with their surroundings from the get go if you ask me (Roger Rabbit being a good example of what I'm talking about).
It's just that this is the standard "Enter fucks up a tired plot" trope in play. What could have been a generic, but otherwise watchable (readable, in this case) premise is ruined by the man's speech patterns, terrible grammar, forced jokes and the fact that his characters aren't really characters. Plus the fact that he's being a hypocrite by doing this.
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