Please listen to this song I wrote and give me some feedback. -

[Songwriter #19]

 

[Bryan Magee]

 

[Crichax]

The lyrics and the singing are not very good.

 

[AF 802]

Cucked and gay.

 

[GreenJacket]

It's pretty good. Keep up the good work.

 

[Mightykiwi]

This is your friends song that you want us to rip into, isn't it?

Tell your friend that the instrumental section is alright, but to please see a vocal coach, they aren't too expensive and can do wonders. Also, unless you're trying to one up Lil Pump, repeating the same shit over and over again just isn't going to work too well

 

[nekrataal]

Sounds pretty awful

 

[NOT Sword Fighter Super]

You're like a shitty version of Wesley Willis....and that's saying something.

What's with newfag tards? They all take the same bus or something?

 

[Wilhelm Bittrich]

Jenny Nicholson should sue you, faggot!

 

[Le Pew]

It sounds like it got yodeled by a dirty butthole. Sorry

 

[Rancid Flid]

OP needs to take a new direction in their career. I suggest suicide bomber.

 

[Feline Supremacist]

I hate nigger music. Sorry I can't be of any help.

 

[RoLoKo]

Even Russell Greer can do better

 

[The Manglement]

I think it's really good. It's important for people with mental disabilities to have ways to be creative. I bet everyone who works at the home is very proud of you.

 

[Diabeetus]

I will not listen to this song, nor will I give you feedback.

 

[YourMommasBackstory]

you can't even add video as a media on your post, the fuck should i care

 

[LateNightComics]

Dumb and retarded.