Rate my screenplay - I think it has potential

[Autistic zoomer]

Title: Confidential Informant

Genre: Thriller/Mystery

Format: Feature

Logline: A police officer investigates his father’s rape and murder. The semen from the rape has a DNA match, but when the police officer questions the suspect he discovers that the suspect only raped his father and someone else coincidentally murdered his father on the same day. Now, the police officer must work with his father’s rapist to retrace his steps and find his father’s killer.

 

[The Pink Panther]

Boring, 12/10.

 

[Fromtheblackdepths]

Is it played completely straight like an Eli Roth/Italian Movie or is it a comedy?

 

[Just A Butt]

lol cop's dad is gay

 

[Autistic zoomer]

Is it played completely straight like an Eli Roth/Italian Movie or is it a comedy?

Completely straight, this is in no way meant to be comedic.

 

[Prophetic Spirit]

too gay & predictable

 

[Fromtheblackdepths]

7/10

Interesting idea but if this is serious then you're going have to sell it very hard towards the average person.

 

[EryngiumLostHisKeys]

Completely straight, this is in no way meant to be comedic.

Gay-Romance-Thriller-Mystery is a bit of a niche audience but you be you bro.

 

[MrTroll]

Wasn't this the plot to Citizen Kane? Try thinking up something original.

 

[Big Nasty]

Lame and gay

 

[NOT Sword Fighter Super]

Add in a time travel aspect and make the cop his own father's rapist/murderer.

WHAT A TWIST!

 

[Frozen Fishsticks]

Make it about Marvel super heroes so the Chinese audiences will eat it up.