Realism in Loli Hentai - "I myself was sexually precocious and was doing very sexual things around 8 or 9, before I could even get an erection. No, I will not talk about it further."

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SSj_Ness

Time to rape organized crime
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You weren't kidding about being autistic. I'm not reading that book, but imagine putting all this effort into something productive instead of your obsessive perversion.
 

No Exit

Always ready to throw hands
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This is terminal levels of autism and the writer of it, whether it's OP or a copypasta, desperately needs to be put down.
 

Xenarthran

Known homosexual
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Masterful. Simply masterful. Do you think one can die happy knowing they've produced such beautiful work?
 

Justtocheck

Earth is big enough for cooperation
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Just admit you are a pedo OP. It's less shameful than hide it in an "experiment".

Ralph is going to review the realism in scat porn next, for the "science".
 

I (Don't) Have A Gun

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I'd suggest some structural changes.
Firstly the intention of the research needs to be clearly stated preferably under it's own subheading, currently it's interwoven into the introductory paragraph and this can be difficult for the casual reader to know why this was done.
I'd also say that adding a conclusion is a must, even if it's just a few sentences recapping the findings and clearly stating the results.

As it was explained to me, most people will read the intro and the conclusion of a research article, and based on that decide if they want to go into the details. So it's a good idea to make sure that those are clear and concise.