We all live in an autistic boy's snow globe. The end.
this isn't really original, as the [X in cwcville] format has been done beforeRAIN SLIVES IN CWCVILLE
Let's see how good (or competent) Christian Weston Chandler is at dealing with someone else's true and (seriously) original creation!
Rain is a sergal btw
(Cwc is competent as he is continent)
I think the whole rewrite would be better if you just cast Chris as the villain. His spastic lolcow persona would make for a perfect antagonist.-Start with CWCville under the tyrannical control of whoever the main bad guy is.
-The leader of the resistance, Chris (unless the main bad guy is Chris), organizes a Dragonball style Pokemon tournament to find the greatest warriors on the good guys side and to inspire others.
-Insert Chaotic Combo (who at this point have not met and no longer have electric powers) beating a few fodder characters until they have to start fighting each other to continue to advance.
-Punchy and Magi-chan match up, Magi-chan wins easily, Magi-chan is very arrogant in character because of his intelligence and looks down on Punchy. Punchy is characterized as the dumb muscle with a short fuse in this remake, Punchy dislikes the way Magi-chan views him but is forced to recognize his superiority. Punchy declares Magi-chan his rival and vows to one day defeat him.
-Angelica's match comes next, introduce Rosechu as her opponent. Angelica is timid and apprehensive to fight and thinks about forfeiting. Rosechu gets angry at her for acting like what she perceives as a negative female stereotype, attacks her and forces her to have to defend herself. Angelica realizes that there are sometimes when she must use violence in order to protect herself and others and fights back with full spirit but ultimately loses to Rosechu's dark type (Rosechu would be primarily dark as she evolves into Vamprosa)
-Skip to the finals (flesh out the rest of the tournament if desired). Rosechu as one fighter then introduce Sonichu as her opponent, hint that he had the most difficult opponents but still won without so much as a scratch whereas Rosechu is very roughed up. Rosechu thinks her womanly powers will assure her victory, still loses but to something questionable or has some kind of excuse so that she can still maintain that she is stronger than Sonichu. Rosechu can't help but be impressed by Sonichu's strength, will and good sportsmanship/kindness, she develops feelings for him but due to her pride as an independant woman expresses her feelings through acting as though she dislikes Sonichu and is only his ally because the people need them to work together, leaving room for their eventual love to develope throughout the series.
-Chris awards Sonichu with the Chaotic Crystal he received from his late father (Bob who was the mayor before the bad guys took over) for winning the tournament. Showing off his humble side, Sonichu divides the Crystal into five and gives one part each to Wild, Angelica, Bubbles, Punchy and Magi-chan saying that it would be better if they all got stronger together and that he can't take back CWCville alone or some gay shit like that. Chris declares them to be the Chaotic Combo, spectators cheer and the entire resistance is empowered by the unity they feel.
-Rosechu questions Sonichu's giving away the crystal, her tsundere level rises to say 75% and she says he did it just to show off, then asks why he didn't split it into six and give her a piece and he tells her she's already strong enough. Rosechu's tsundere level rises to 100%, end with her calling him stupid or hitting him or something like that.
And that's your first arc, bad guys not revealed too soon, show that the bad guys truly are evil and not just people Chris doesn't like, establish Chris as an important but ultimately powerless entity (and never give him powers), not too many characters too soon, sow the seeds of relationships without outright forcing them, make characters unique from each other and give them room to grow, leave plenty of room for possibilities in the plot (Who else was at the tournament, other to-be-revealed good guys, bad guy spies? How did the bad guys take over? Did Bob die from natural causes and bad guys took advantage or did they kill him? If they killed him does Chris know? Where did these new Pokemon come from and how did they get their powers?), most importantly give a plot to the story (taking back the city and defeating all the bad guys).
It'll never make money or be published so including copyrighted characters and elements shouldn't matter.
A friendly nudge...So for some time now, I've been working on a remake of Sonichu called: Sonichu Redemption. The premise is to completely was to completely break-down Sonichu to it's most basic concept: A story set in a world where the Sonic and Pokemon worlds are merged together, with the main character being a fusion between Sonic and Pikachu. What this amounted to was, taking the Sonichu cast and retooling them so that they fit with this world better. Namely, turning all the Electric Hedgehog Pokemon and reimagining them as "Pokehogs" Anthromorphs that resemble a hedgehog mixed with a Pokemon. It's come a ways since its inception and I started to slowly add elements of the original Sonichu.
You can read it here: http://neyola298.deviantart.com/gallery/28968480/Sonichu-Redemption and you can see all the concept art of reimagined characters that haven't made a formal appearance yet here: http://neyola298.deviantart.com/gallery/30033426/Sonichu-Redemption-Concept-art
Well put.I honestly don't think a good rewrite of Sonichu is possible (or at least a serious one). Even if you re-wrote it into an incredible story with compelling characters, it's still a story about Sonic recolours and Pokemon. It'd be like Barkley Shut Up and Slam Gaiden. It would have a great story, but the premise is too rediculous to take seriously.
So sorry Lemonz, can't say I'm a fan of your attempt.So for some time now, I've been working on a remake of Sonichu called: Sonichu Redemption. The premise is to completely was to completely break-down Sonichu to it's most basic concept: A story set in a world where the Sonic and Pokemon worlds are merged together, with the main character being a fusion between Sonic and Pikachu. What this amounted to was, taking the Sonichu cast and retooling them so that they fit with this world better. Namely, turning all the Electric Hedgehog Pokemon and reimagining them as "Pokehogs" Anthromorphs that resemble a hedgehog mixed with a Pokemon. It's come a ways since its inception and I started to slowly add elements of the original Sonichu.
Try the fanart thread for the drawings. Probably best results there.I know I'm too late for this, but I made an account just for this. I actually have an idea.
For starters, I been playing with the designs of the pokemon - mobians hybrid and realized why the designs are not working well. It's because the edgy early 2000s mobian designs would same body, lacking a unique style. Therefore, they should be designs as classics forms like simple shapes, not focusing on gendering the body like giving breast for example. This will give a 90s - cartoonish vibe that will help make to the two franchise work together.
Two, all the pokemons present in the comics should devolved into the primary pokemon forms like Layla Flaaffy reverted into a mareep for example. You can use the evolutions forms as boss stage battle when fighting each pokemons like cuphead. I tried to design the sonichus, but I realized that the Pikachu is hard to design so instead, I used the other pokemons from the Pikachu family which helps since they have to evolution forms; thus, perfect characters to play.
Another, is the designs of the pokemons for instances - if they don't resemble an animal/bug or is impossible to draw as mobians, make them into badnik robots instead.
The plot is: Motherboard (Mary Lee Welsh) and her goon pokemons are kidnapping electric pokemons like Dedeene/Pachirisu/Togedemaru or just any regular old mobian pokemons to power up robots or turn into robots. It is up the Steel Togedemaru (Sonichu) and his friends to free them.
Since Christine Chan played Animal Crossing, the CWCvillge should be a village instead for all the pokemon - mobians to live in. No humans should exist instead except Mary Lee Welsh kinda like Eggman being the only human in the sonic games.
Sorry, it's sounds more like a game than a story - trying to at least a certain structure to the pokemon - mobian world.
I do have redesign drawings, but I not sure if anyone wants to see them since this thread is old.