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Redesigning FloraverseBecause PK is a fucking idiot

Discussion in 'Art & Literature' started by Bugaboo, May 9, 2016.

  1. i come back to this thread after not being notified and holy shit, there's so much fantastic media here and i'm loving it!
     
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  2. Session Two is about...half way done. After I write a little bit, Shmoopy is introduced, which Meowth wants to write for, so i'll ask him soon enough, Then i'll write the first fight scene with the whole party put together against one of The Troupe's weapons terrorizing a forest, which is where @DatBepisTho 's character is introduced, inside a magical forest. A lot of the creatures in the forest have been made into enemies by P.K., and they're destroying the forest and killing the animals in it as a feat of strength. After the party defeats the archangel, controlled by one of her goons, they're greeted by a flock of reporters. Needing a name for their group on the spot, Joytail names it The Loveless Coalition. This is shortlived, though, as the cops start chasing them, which is left on a To Be Continued sort of mark. There's an epilouge, too, introducing Detective Emmett (Is that the name?) making a pact with The Troupe to destroy The Loveless Coalition for exposure with one of his exposes.
     
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  3. I do like the idea of PK being this force of mutation and destruction that threatens the nonsentient creatures as much as she does the sentient. Also potentially causing creatures to despair and go mad or turn into "angels."

    Pipp or Stolas?
     
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  4. Stolas, i believe. The moth lookin' dude. But Pipp will appear soon, probably with Mementa and co.
     
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  5. That was a dumb question given Stolas' entire backstory pertains to a forest. My bad.:oops:

    Yes! Small band of misfits meets smaller band of misfits.
     
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    #665 DatBepisTho, Dec 5, 2018 at 12:59 PM
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  6. Don't beat yourself up, it's fine! Also i like your idea that despair can cause people to turn into archangels.

    I like to think it's somewhat similar to depression and it slowly consumes them in this black-y goo as they sink deeper in their depression, and people have to like put the victim in these intervention scenarios and/or have to suffer seeing their loved ones succumb to this, not knowing it's because of the Hitler/Stalin-esque leader they worship.
     
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  7. I've been toying with the idea that Crater Caverns fell to that and became the deranged hostile sort that Pipp and the few others had to put out of their misery.
    Which is why under the politeness and goodytwo shoes dialogue, there's this numbness that enables him to just cut them (and others) down without much damage from the mind-breaking affect they have.
     
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    #667 DatBepisTho, Dec 5, 2018 at 1:19 PM
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  8. So there's a part of him that's squeaky clean but another part that's like super fucked off? Like if XXXTentacion got reincarnated into a care bear?
     
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  9. Never thought of that description, but I guess?
    Still somehow less angsty than the other losers' backstories in the fact that it doesn't shape his motivations. It's just something that happened and it felt really bad, so he doesn't address it at all. Pipp is the idiot that buries it deep down.
     
    #669 DatBepisTho, Dec 5, 2018 at 2:23 PM
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  10. Yeah, because he's never had to talk about it with anyone, he's never had to confront it head on, which is why he can become so violent (i assume, considering how volatile his powers are) and why he can become such an on/off member of The Loveless Coalition due to his moody tendencies. Do i have that right?
     
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  11. Close! It is the reason for the volatile ability, but he's not moody or aggressive per say. He is pretty intense at times and can switch focus like it's nothing once something is taken care of. It'd be why he often suddenly goes off in another direction from them when it's apparent they've got it handled for awhile.

    There's a definite lack of rage, though, as that burned out in about a month. When he breaks down, it's because of the sorrow.
     
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  12. So he's very flippant? or socially stupido?
     
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  13. Flippant. At least until it's obvious it means a lot to someone/it's time to get down to business and then he's serious beans. He's socially adept ,which probably makes it exasperating for the more serious doom and gloom types.

    Kinda like the tiny team dad. It's dad jokes until someone gets hurt. Then the baddie doing the hurting gets dead or injured. Or serious shit arises and it needs solving diplomatically.
     
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    #673 DatBepisTho, Dec 6, 2018 at 2:18 PM
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  14. God, Him making dad jokes is the best/worst idea in this entire thread.
     
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  15. Worse than Schmoopy sounding like Nathan Lane?
    I made it to da big leagues!

    But seriously, if you feel you may have difficulty writing for a character like that, I'd be glad to help with his and Stolas' appearances.
     
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  16. Nah, i can write that! If you have any ideas for either of them, design or character-wise, please spare them! I love both of them and i wanna keep up to date.
     
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  17. Joytail (Beau Billingslea)
    Triste (Spike Spencer)
    Luxgay (Steve Blum)
    Wraps (Johnny Yong Bosch)
    Ameer (Ameer Vann)
    Mementa (Cassandra Morris)

    Anna (Ellen Page)
    Shmoopy (Nathan Lane)

    P.K. (Helen Mirren)
    EV (Amanda C. Miller)

    Might make an updated list.
     
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  18. If Shmoopy's gonna be gay, he's going to be the gayest of the gays.
     
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  19. @Meowthkip We wouldn't have him any other gay.

    D'aw, that's sweet of you.:heart-full:

    I'll let you know if anything changes!
     
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    #679 DatBepisTho, Dec 6, 2018 at 9:17 PM
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  20. Your welcome! I cherish all of you. Writing this gives me a break from worrying about my mental health all the time, as well as you all just generally making amazing characters for me to create a world in.
     
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