Redrawing/editing art made by tearzah/dollieguts and their copycats -

[Aaa0aaa0]

Fag on the internet attempts a redraw:

Original:

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This was posted yesterday on Salem's Toyhouse. What kind of monstrosity is this? The shirt sleeves aren't even the same size, and if you ask me, Ash is gaining a lot of weight. Also, what's going on with the legs? Love the lack of white lines.

Spoiler: I haven't practiced chubby people I'm sorry

I couldn't make the hair horns work so I threw them out. Is Ash still a filthy junkie? That's how I interpret them as.

Critique very much welcomed, don't have as many places to ask for it nowadays.

 

[gloss]

quick edit

Spoiler: original

Spoiler: edit

Spoiler: watermark

 

[Aaa0aaa0]

I'm so proud, you kept the stylized look without having to lose any traits.

 

[Sea creature]

quick edit

Spoiler: original

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Spoiler: edit

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Spoiler: watermark

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NOW if Tea's art looked half as good as yours I can see people commissioning them. Cause It's totally commission you.

 

[Hewwo Kitty]

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Quick and shitty pencil sketch redraw. I had to actually look for the character to see what the fuck the outfit was. I am not giving her beach ball tits.

Spoiler: The actual character

ETA: I have problems drawing legs sometimes. I know that leg is floating

 

[Aaa0aaa0]

Aside from the leg, looks tons better, not a fucking horrific tangle of lines and shapes with bad contrasts. I'm lookibg at something that makes sense.

I hope you don't mind but I think adding in a tiny nose would work best for this style, as you already have a bunch of small details down that the chibi looks a little strange without a nose. (Obviously feel free not to add one, this is just art to dunk on Tea quickly)

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Quick and shitty pencil sketch redraw. I had to actually look for the character to see what the fuck the outfit was. I am not giving her beach ball tits.
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Spoiler: The actual character

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ETA: I have problems drawing legs sometimes. I know that leg is floating

Time to play: Guess the original artist's fetish!

 

[Sonya-chan]

Thanks for the watermark!

 

[Assclown Territory]

Hello!
To clarify who I am, I'll leave a short summary.
I'm a former fan of Tearzah that kind of went back and fourth because of Ponder's video and stuff? Anyway, I was wondering if I could get a commission redrawn once it's out? I commissioned Tearzah when I was under the impression the allegations against them were false but now I see differently.
I kind of joined the forums only to ask but I understand if you all cannot.

Get back to me when you all can, thanks! Also I haven't blocked Tea yet because I don't want them to get money without me getting my art. I assume you all would get why.

 

[Lime Rogue]

Hello!
To clarify who I am, I'll leave a short summary.
I'm a former fan of Tearzah that kind of went back and fourth because of Ponder's video and stuff? Anyway, I was wondering if I could get a commission redrawn once it's out? I commissioned Tearzah when I was under the impression the allegations against them were false but now I see differently.
I kind of joined the forums only to ask but I understand if you all cannot.

Get back to me when you all can, thanks! Also I haven't blocked Tea yet because I don't want them to get money without me getting my art. I assume you all would get why.

Lmao you're already expecting it to be shit huh?

I'm sure someone here will take pity on your soul, since you asked so nicely.

 

[Assclown Territory]

Lmao you're already expecting it to be shit huh?

I'm sure someone here will take pity on your soul, since you asked so nicely.

Prettty much! Haha.
Aww thank you, I appreciate it. I don’t want to be a bother and I’m glad I don’t come off as one.

 

[Marnie]

Forgive me for the shoddy art, I'm still working on general anatomy and clothing wrinkles.

Spoiler: original

Spoiler: Redrawn

I actually don't hate the original image that much. It's simple, cute, and well stylized. But I redrew it for science! this thread. I'm kind of between styles at the moment, still trying to figure out what works best for me, so it's a little awkward at the moment. I used @gloss 's watermark for her ass.

 

[Assclown Territory]

Spoiler: Redrawn

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this is pretty cute! also making her hair blue was a good idea, it just makes her look nicer.

 

[Lime Rogue]

Forgive me for the shoddy art, I'm still working on general anatomy and clothing wrinkles.

Spoiler: original

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Spoiler: Redrawn

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I actually don't hate the original image that much. It's simple, cute, and well stylized. But I redrew it for science! this thread. I'm kind of between styles at the moment, still trying to figure out what works best for me, so it's a little awkward at the moment. I used @gloss 's watermark for her ass.

It looks very nice, to be honest. The thigh high socks fucked me up tho lol I thought her skin color changed.

 

[Marnie]

It looks very nice, to be honest. The thigh high socks fucked me up tho lol I thought her skin color changed.

Ah fuck I see where you're coming from. I thought the yellow was underused in the OG but I just made it look tan

 

[NoFeline]

Redraw but also Redesign

Spoiler: Here's the character, Anmanari:

So, considering that the Pintupi are a historically oppressed minority who were stripped of their culture and forcefully converted, I thought it was a liiittle fucked up to make her practice a fake pan-european white girl religion, so number one, ditching the witch hat. Second, referencing actual Pintupi girls instead of drawing some weird Indian caricature. The new skin color is an improvement but otherwise I don't know what's with the palette change or the whole suddenly looking 40 years old but I can only assume Tearzah is trying to cash in on the Giant Vampire Mommy trend. The character is supposed to be 25 and 4'11". Last thing, I replaced the holly with edible Australian fruits, namely tucker bush cherry and desert quandong.

Spoiler: Tearzah

Spoiler: Sloppier than I would like it to be

Yeah, I'm aware rabbits don't have pawpads-- but the green beans pun was too hard to resist.

 

[Assclown Territory]

Spoiler: Sloppier than I would like it to be

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Yeah, I'm aware rabbits don't have pawpads-- but the green beans pun was too hard to resist.

this is so so cute!! the grayish green and the amber eyes work so well on her. also, thank you for respecting religious beliefs. i agree that it is offensive that tea would make that up.

i made a model of the redesign of ash @NoFeline made.

sorry for not spoilering, still figuring out the system.

i got the hair from smol-hooman
i got the eyes from jerememez
i got the outfit from micammd
and i got the pose from snorlaxin.
i hope i did her justice! i used one of those gothic outfits to follow the OWO dolly aesthetic.

 

[gloss]

i made a model of the redesign of ash @NoFeline made. View attachment 1895544
sorry for not spoilering, still figuring out the system.

i got the hair from smol-hooman
i got the eyes from jerememez
i got the outfit from micammd
and i got the pose from snorlaxin.
i hope i did her justice! i used one of those gothic outfits to follow the OWO dolly aesthetic.

the hair is a bit too bright and the face could use some more definition as it's a bit hard to make out the facial features properly, but other than that this is pretty good, and i'd love to see a full body version!
also,

Spoiler: how to add spoilers

when making a post, you should be able the find the spoiler option on the bar at the top (where the emoji and quote options are). the spoiler icon is an eye with a line through it. from there you can add a title and whatever images you want. hope that helps

 

[Assclown Territory]

the hair is a bit too bright and the face could use some more definition as it's a bit hard to make out the facial features properly, but other than that this is pretty good, and i'd love to see a full body version!
also,

Spoiler: how to add spoilers

when making a post, you should be able the find the spoiler option on the bar at the top (where the emoji and quote options are). the spoiler icon is an eye with a line through it. from there you can add a title and whatever images you want. hope that helps

thanks a bunch!! also i'll keep in mind to use more realistic textures because the official TDA textures are just kind of just generic anime ones.

here she is! @gloss i followed your critique and used a different face and hair texture.

not to get too off topic but i'm gonna be staying on this thread because i'm not good at dark topics. not really set for rabbit holes either, i'd rather just compliment redraws. i don't wanna make a bigger fool of myself than i already have so i think it's smart.

 

[gloss]

was inspired by darklord's post in the main thread to make my own brand new ORIGINAL oc!!1!

if you say its ash i will BLOCK you, they clearly have a different hair style AND different eye colour uwu