Your's is really cute! It's so much more expressive, and the background you chose caught my eye immediately! Big improvement, dude.Hi.
And I spent a lot more time on this than needed. I seriously wanted to redraw this and you can tell I was getting frustrated especially with the bodyBut otherwise I tried to make it more interesting. I think this is because my PC is still stuck in BIOS Utility mode and I've used Ibis paint. Sorta hate the line work I did.
Here is mine.
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Here is Tearzah's
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