Alright, I’ll change it now. And I agree! It was just the general order I began writing things. Thanks for the tips, everyone.I think the reason this op isn't very effective is because you're focusing more on the bad comedy and furry stuff, at least in the top half of the thread. The first video and first paragraph are supposed to show the reason he has the thread in the first place, and catch the reader. What makes this guy stand out, at least in my opinion is when he does his girl voice and fights with his dad and that's the main draw. You should replace the first video with one of the girl clips and let the furry shit and bad art come in second. You're basically hiding all the good stuff on the bottom where people are gonna miss it.
Also in the meantime, enjoy some close-up arm pics. I don't know how he is able to share pics like this and not feel dysphoric.