The Mysterious Mr. Enter / Jonathan Rozanski's "Growing Around" - IndieGoGo Campaign Failed, John going off the deep end

Baldur's Gait

Huh, you're a queer fellow!
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I love that he plugs Growing Around for his Misdirection example, as if to say it's a prime example of it.

He does forget the one very basic thing about comedy, and that's delivery. Some of the best comedians can take inherently unfunny material and make it funny because of how they deliver it. It also works in reverse; a shitty comedian can take something funny and suck the laughter out of it.

The same goes for writing as well. Comedic writing needs to be sharp and carefully crafted. If it's not written well, then the delivery falls flat. You could have some of the funniest ideas in the world, but if you can't write it well, then it doesn't matter how funny it is.

Not to mention, some of the best comedic acts out there work specifically because they defy comedic conventions. Monty Python is an extremely obvious example. Some AS shows like Aqua Teen Hunger Force and Tim and Eric also don't really fit into the conventions Enter lists.
 

SpergPatrol

You're a faggot Harry
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If you have to be analytical about comedy to the point where you have "principles", you've immediately failed.
That kind of obvious by the fact that humor is subjective.

Like trying to write a rule book on what shape clouds are definitely.
You can't make a objective fact rulebook for stuff like that because humor just like a cloud is different from one person to another.
 

Jewelsmakerguy

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I've only glanced over it and I already know this tard doesn't know ANYTHING about comedy - he really has no right speaking on it, as a result. Thanks for the update, though, Kiwis.
Enter barely has a grasp over any writing basics, such as writing in and of itself, for one. So him attempting comedy was doomed to fail from the get go.
 

Mapo Tofu

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Enter barely has a grasp over any writing basics, such as writing in and of itself, for one. So him attempting comedy was doomed to fail from the get go.
He even uses his own show as an example.
Because "Lel the kid is the one driving asking if they are there yet" is the funniest joke ever written and him mentioning it violates the Geneva Conventions
 

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I don't understand how he can't answer the question about how medical treatment would work in Growing Around. I mean these kids can invent a spaceship to get to Mars so why not just say they invented a robot doctor, an autodoc like in the Fallout Games or something like the bacta tanks in Star Wars. I thought of this after reading the question the first time in this thread and it took me like 5 seconds of thought.
 

andr0id psycho sho(ker

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I don't understand how he can't answer the question about how medical treatment would work in Growing Around. I mean these kids can invent a spaceship to get to Mars so why not just say they invented a robot doctor, an autodoc like in the Fallout Games or something like the bacta tanks in Star Wars. I thought of this after reading the question the first time in this thread and it took me like 5 seconds of thought.
that's five seconds more thought than Enter did in building his world beyond, Kids rule, adults suck
 

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